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Itisrightthatuniversitygraduatesshouldearnhighersalarythanlesswell-educatedmembers.Towhatextenddoyouagreeordisagree?
正文：Thereismuchdebatesurroundingtheissueofuniversitygraduatesbeingpaidmoresalarythanthosewhohaveneverbeentouniversityforfurthereducations.Itendtoagreewiththisstatementtoalargeextendthatpayingmoremoneytowell-educatedworkersisjustified.
Tobeginwith,universitygraduatescontributemoretooursocietythantheirless-educatedpeersboththeoreticallyandpractically.Unlilkethepracticalskillsthatcouldbelearntthroughgeneralwork,thetheoreticalknowledge,whichisthedrivingforcebehindtheproductivity,couldonlybeacquiredviauniversityeducation.Infact,theuniversitystudentsshouldapplythemselvesandworkhardatschooltograspwhattheyaresupposetolearn,andeventuallyapplytheirtheoreticalknowldgeintopracticetoboosttheindustrialproductivity.Therefore,theireffortsshouldbehighlightedbygavenfinancialsupportintermsoftheircontributiontotheoreticalandpracticaldevelopments.
However,somepeoplemayarguethatitisunjustifiedthataperson'sstandardofincomeshouldjustbedecidedsimplelybasedonhisorherstandardofeducation.And,thisisoftentruethatapersonwhohasneverstudiedatuniversitystillcanbeaprofessorathisorherjobandthenearnhighsalary.Ipersonallythinkonlyafewpeoplecanachievethetopoftheirprofessionswithoutuniversityeducation.Iftheydoachieveit,theysurelyshouldbehighlypaid.
Inconclution,agoodpaymentfortheuniversitygraduates,Ithink,isreasonable.Inaddition,theless-educatedworkersshouldalsohavethesametreatmentaslongashisorhercontributionisasvaluedashisorherwell-educatedcolleagues.
