Opportunity(机会) 【要求】题目:机会(opportunity),机会,对每个人的成才都很重要,不同的人对机会有着不同的看法。在人的一生中,你会面临许多机会,也会错过很多机会。那么你是怎样看待机会的呢?请写一篇短文谈谈你对机会的看法。【范文】OpportunitySom popl rgard opportunity as th most important part of thir lif. It's th way to succss. So whn thy s thir frinds succd, thy will complain that thy ar not lucky nough to hav th opportunity. But othr popl think that opportunity is shr luck, with thir hard work, knowldg and skill, opportunity will b waiting for thm vrywhr.Although th attituds towards opportunity ar diffrnt, opportunity is important indd, and no on should nglct. It can mak a prson succssful. W should grasp vry valuabl opportunity and mak good us of it, othrwis nothing can b lft with us but rgrt and disappointmnt.But I think it is not opportunity itslf that dcids a prson's succss or failur. It is fair to vry prson, I think. To grasp th opportunity, w nd knowldg, skill and xprinc. In a word, opportunity is important but not dcisiv.【评语】本文层层推进,首先列举两种对立的观点,然后阐述机会的重要性,最后以自己的观点结束全文。文章很有深度。从语言上讲,说理透彻,也很生动,避免了题目一大就空的毛病。此外,文章在逻辑上严密,观点不偏不倚,不失为一佳作。 Opportunity(机会)
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