I am Rose.It ’s half past six. I am getting up. It ‘s seven o ’clock.I am going to school.It’s twelve o ‘clock. I am eating lunch. It s half past four.I am at home.I am doing my homework.It ‘s five o ‘clock. I am eaning dinner.It’s nine o ‘clock. I am go to bed.I am busy.名师点评:呵呵,小作者以时间为序,记述了自己一天的活动,紧扣题目"My Daily Life"。 And it seems you are really busy all day long. It also indicates that you are a diligent girl. I hope you can take care of yourself and make big progress.(学乐中国特聘教师:高丹丹老师)2009-7-11 13:25:00
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