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因果链分析说明:焚烧树叶对人有害-Burning Is Harmful to People

更新时间:2024-04-23 16:23:22

焚烧树叶对人有害

因果链分析说明:焚烧树叶对人有害-Burning Is Harmful to People

【内容提示】

根据内容提示写一篇提醒人们不要焚烧树叶的文章,说明焚烧树叶产生的烟雾,会污染环境,有害于人们的身体健康。

内容梗概:

前几天你去火车站给朋友送行,路上看到清洁工人正在烧树叶,你由此联想到老师曾讲过树叶燃烧的烟尘会对大气造成污染,并直接影响人体健康,导致癌症。你在文中呼吁人们不要烧树叶。

【作文示范】

Burning Is Harmful to Popl

A fw days ago, I wnt to th railway station to s my frind off. On th way I saw strt-clanrs burning dry lavs. What thy do is wrong.

Burning things dos harm to popl. I rmmbrd that our tachrs onc told us that burning dry lavs would giv off smok and dust which in turn pollut air. And what is mor, it would b harmful to popl's halth. Whn popl brath th air with smok, th smok might lad to cancr. As a rsult, th cancr would caus popl to di.

As w all know, lavs can mak vry good frtilizr. It would b bttr to collct thm for th filds.

【词语解释】

frtilizr['f+:tilaiz+] n.肥料

【写法指要】

本文分析焚烧树叶的害处。引言段最后一句是全文的篇题。扩充段第一句是主题句,下面分析说:人燃烧树叶,树叶产生烟尘,烟尘污染空气,空气被人吸入,人得癌症,癌症致人死亡。这样就构成了一种因果链。所以我们说,本文是因果链分析说明文。结尾段中,作者提出自己的建议。

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