问题描述:
今年的大学英语四级作文onlineshopping我想估一下分,
nowadays,withtherapidoftheinternet,shoppingonlineisbecomingafasion,especiallyamongtheyoung.
Ibelievethatmanyfactorscontributedtothewidespreadofonlineshopping.Firstly,itisconvenientforpeopletobuythegoodsandtheydon'tneedtogooutsidetoseachthegoodsinshopsonebyonesothatsavetheirtime.Secondly,thegoodssellsontheinternetischeaperthaninshops,itcansavetheirmuchmoney.However,shoppingonlinecanalsobepotentiallydangerious.sincethebuyerandthesellerdonotneedtodealwithface-to-face,thequalityofthegoodscan'tbeguaranteed,andthegoodsmaybedamagedduringthedelively.
Frommypiontofview,shoppingonlineisatrendandweshouldnotbeprohibited.Butweshouldbecarefulwhileusingitandthegovernmentshouldbetakesomemeasuresmakeitperfect.
顺便帮我看一下这个作文的语法什么的问题,我英语基础不够好