问题描述：
高中英语作文求挑错,求改正,谢谢!（150字左右的）
题目：目前你学校正在进行素质教育,双休日不允许老师统一组织学生上课和考试,但是可以开展丰富有益的课外活动.请写一篇短文,谈谈你对这件事的看法.
Nowadays,ourschoolistryingthequality-orientededucationaimingatmakingusstudentsmorewell-rounded.Ourschooldon'tallowteacherstoorganizesomethingembracingstudents'testingandhavingclassestogetheratweekends.Meanwhile,studentsareencouragedtojoininmeaningfulactivitiestoopentheireyesight.Ithinkthisissuehasaarrayoftremendouspositiveeffectsonstudents.
Whatcomesfirstisthatstudentswillhavemorechancestolearnwhattheycan'tlearnatschool.Quality-orientededucationnotpracticed,seldomcanstudentsbelikelytobroadentheirhorizon.Futhermore,studentsmayhavelesspressureonstudyingandtheywillstudybetter.Lastbutnotleast,throughalloftheout-classactivities,studentscancultivatetheirowninterests,andthisadvantagesisofvitalsignificance.
AsfarasI'mconcerned,westudentsreallybenefitalotfromquality-orientededucation,anditishightimethatalltheschoolpracticedthisnewmethodofeducation.
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